Thought I’d add a page before we see her in the temple, outside the temple. In the cover I had the entry as kind of a large mouth with teeth. I’ve closed the stone door here in pg 1.
Jill is introduced with the ominous temple front. She sees a one eyed skull stone keyhole. She reaches for a key from her waist. She inserts the key.
PG 2.
I was thinking of showing the stone mouth open with sound effects as dusty air wooshes by. JILL steps into the temple.
Anyway, since the story has no dialogue, think it will be fun for the reader to have a moment by moment, action vs reaction kind of thing going on, with the 3 senses at play here.
